既然是二版，自然应该比一版多一些内容。正好这诗虽然挺长，写得却比较浅显，又主题明确，是个用来翻译的好原料。
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我曾经总结过，成功的翻译作品肯定不能只是逐字翻译，而是要在这个基础上用目标语言进行再创作，使成品符合那个语言中对诗歌的定义和要求。
所以在这个贴里，我会先发一个字面上的翻译，然后加上一个“再创作”的结果。

先注明一下，这首诗的英译已经有一个出版了的版本，收录于刘若愚教授（斯坦福大学）的著作 The Poetry of Li Shang-yin: Ninth-Century Baroque Chinese Poet （李商隐诗：九世纪中国的巴洛克诗人）
我的这个逐字翻译与刘教授的版本非常相似，因为 （1）他这本书里的翻译基本上是字面翻译，宇文所安的翻译也是如此；（2）这诗里大部分字词都没什么歧义，所以大家翻译出来的就大同小异了

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李肱所遗画松诗书两纸得四十韵
A gift from Li Gong / painting of pine trees / and poem / two pages / got forty rhymes
万草已凉露，
Ten thousand grasses / already / cool with dew
开图披古松。
Open the scroll / reveal / ancient pines

青山遍沧海，
Blue mountains / all around / vast sea
此树生何峰?
These trees / grow / on which peak

孤根邈无倚，
Solitary roots / far away / relying on nothing
直立撑鸿濛。
Stand straight up / holding up / high heaven
端如君子身，
Upright like / bodies of true gentlemen
挺若壮士胸。
Erect as / chests of brave knights

樛枝势夭矫，
Low branches / bend powerfully
忽欲蟠拿空。
Suddenly want to / coil upwards / capture the sky.
又如惊螭走，
Again like / startled dragons / running
默与奔云逢。
Silently with / rushing clouds / encounter

孙枝擢细叶，
Offshoots / give forth / tiny leaves
旖旎狐裘茸。
Lovely / fox fur / finest hair
邹颠蓐发软，
Child’s head / tuft of hair / soft
丽姬眉黛浓。
Beautiful lady / dark brows / dense

视久眩目睛，
Watch a long time / dazzled eyes
倏忽变辉容。
Suddenly / changed appearances
竦削正稠直，
Standup / right now / densely and straightly,
婀娜旋敷峰。
Full of grace / immediately / spread out on peaks

又如洞房冷，
Again like / secluded chamber / cold
翠被张穹笼。
Green coverlet / spread / incensed cage
亦若暨罗女，
Also like / Wisteria Hill / maiden
平旦妆颜容。
Early morning / make up face

细疑袭气母，
Delicate / as if / obtained primordial essence
猛若争神功。
Fierce / as if / compete with God’s work
燕雀固寂寂，
Swallows and sparrows / certainly silent
雾露常冲冲。
Mists and dews / often abundant

香兰愧伤暮，
Fragran torchids / ashamed / age too soon
碧竹惭空中。
Green bamboos / embarrassed / empty inside
可集呈瑞凤，
May gather / auspicious phoenixes
堪藏行雨龙。
Can shelter / rain-making dragons

淮山桂偃蹇，
Cassias from Mount Huai / towering and lofty
蜀郡桑重童。
Mulberry trees from County of Shu / lush and overlapping
枝条亮眇脆，
Branches and leaves / bright and crisp
灵气何由同。
Spiritual power / how can be the same?

终南与清都，
Zhong-nan mountain / and / Pure Capital,
烟雨遥相通。
Mist and rain / distantly / Communicate with each other
安知夜夜意，
Who knows / wishing night after night,
不起西南风?
Cannot raise / southwest wind?

美人昔清兴，
Fine person / in the past / elegant tastes
重之犹月钟。
Cherished it / like / the Lunar Bell
宝笥十八九，
Treasure boxes / more than a dozen
香缇千万重。
Fragrant red silk / thousands of layers